today many parents force their childrens to study all kinds of courses in their early age. what are the reasons behind this? What effect do you think this play this would bring to the children?
Today's era cut-throat competition has made life rather difficult for children. some creators has push out their kids not only to study but also some extra skills and I will explain some causes and impacts of it in this further essay.
There are two main reasons of it. First of all, most guardians hope their children because their infants has able to learn more their field skills and some knowledge about extra activities like computer courses, sports skills consequently, their kids has few knowledge about technical skills and they have maintain physical fitness.
Moreover,most people want their kid grow up bright future becuase of the creators has pass out of their life so that they prefer to bright lifestyle of their child. As a result, they have financial condition better rather than uneducate people.
On the other hand , this tendency has both positive as well as negative impact on infants. The positive impact is they have learn different types of skills. For example, they have more job opportunity in their future life. The negative effect is if parents should put burden on their child to learn opposite to interest in order to it is waste their time and cannot make bright future.
In concusion, I re-iterate my views that the Guardians find their child interest in their particular field and motivate their child. while they make a bright future in their particular interest field. I tend to deem that its positive effect outweigh its negative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0612244898 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4069709501 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583673469388 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.358608882 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208761256976 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692415928748 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417274733239 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118572233524 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224829903514 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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