You were invited to go out by your friend. Due to some reason you couldn’t go. Write a letter apologizing for this and suggest a new time and place to meet.
In your letter, you should say:
apologies
explain what reasons you can’t make it
suggest a new time and place to meet.
Dear Sania,
Hope you are good! It was really nice to hear from you after long run.
I felt disheartened since I remained unable to attend the dinner party in Chandigarh arranged for you. To be very honest, I was so excited to meet you after ages and planned a lot for the meeting, but all the plans went in vain. I am extremely sorry for my absence.
Actually, on that day, all of a sudden my grandfather got heart attack.Owing to this, I was out of sorts and took him to the hospital instantly. Fortunately, we reached on time and saved his life but in all these I forgot to make you call that I would not reach.
I hope you will understand my condition, for it was literally an unavoidable circumstance. Since you are in India for next month also , I have been thinking to invite you for supper at my home. I believe it would prove to be an appropriate destination for both of us to spend quality time.
I would like to say you sorry once again.
See you soon!
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Owing
... sudden my grandfather got heart attack.Owing to this, I was out of sorts and took hi...
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Line 13, column 247, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... these I forgot to make you call that I wouldnt reach. I hope you will understand ...
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Line 17, column 98, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ally an unavoidable circumstance. Since youre in India for next month, I have been th...
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Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: See
...ould like to apologize once again. see you soon! Maria
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55865921788 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61377299022 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659217877095 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7423461417 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1818181818 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241214941019 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897131297584 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492647522823 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115500573354 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496607886383 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.