A local magazine editor has asked for readers’ opinions about the magazine. Write a letter to the magazine
editor. In the letter,
* Describe what made you choose the magazine
* What do you like and dislike about the magazine
* Suggest the improvements you would like to see
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my opinion on the magazine "Your Sports". I prefer this magazine because of its uniqueness to cover the lifestyle of the sports persons, not limited to the activities of their daily life but also the stories they share with the interviewers.
I am a big fan of cricket that I read a lot of sports magazine. But I must admit that I eagerly wait for the issues of "Your Sports" because from there, I get numerous volume of information on my favorite athletes. Moreover, I try to cope with the fashion trend of my preferred stars after going through the articles on specific sportsman. However, I get bored at the moment I go through colorful advertisement pages as those vibrant colors easily distract my mind from the main story.
I would like to suggest that the magazine shall be equipped with more contents rich with sports news. As this maganize is tremendously gaining popularity among the sports enthusiasts, may be this is high time you consider focusing on more sportsters and keeping the advertisements on the corners rather than granting them full pages.
I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity to share my opinion on the magazine that I like most.
Yours faithfully,
Tasnim Fahmi
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| 2019-11-17 | tasnimfahmi | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... they share with the interviewers. I am a big fan of cricket that I read a l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95871559633 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85579103976 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8525285278 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166860502322 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671194426124 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744046517863 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125607850045 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746378734335 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.