On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortnunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- explain how you lost it
- tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to file a travel insurance claim for a DSLR camera that I lost during my travel to berlin. it was Nikon D35 series camera that I purchased from London three months ago at the cost of US$400. The policy number covering this item is TR5900CAM29.
During my 7-day stay at berlin starting on 1st april 2019, I used to carry the camera in my bag before it went missing. As it was an official trip, I had to attend several meetings in various places, I had to use public transport. In the evening of april 4th, I figured out that the camera is not in my bag. Though I called the offices where I attended the meetings, nobody could give information on the camera. I have already informed the local police station about the lost item.
I therefore request you to reimburse USD$360 in my personal bank account as per the travel insurance policy. I have attached the copy of purchase voucher of camera along with the copy of General Diary.
I look forward to receiving the requested money in my bank account at your earliest.
Kind regards,
Tasnim Fahmi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...that I lost during my travel to berlin. it was Nikon D35 series camera that I purc...
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Line 11, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...unt as per the travel insurance policy. I have attached the copy of purchase vouc...
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Line 15, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g with the copy of General Diary. I look forward to receiving the requested...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58291457286 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38065823842 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633165829146 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7622595542 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173072914067 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584416503438 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757947517072 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104624418875 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680251468852 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.