There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Mr. Anderson,
I am writing to you to inform about the reduced number of your buses operating in Yorkshire district and the problems we have been facing associated with it. Recently, almost 20 out of your 80 buses have expired fitness certificate, so those are not allowed to run on roads. As a consequence, the currently operational buses are unable maintain the time schedule.
Irrigularities in bus-time have been causing miseries for the citizens as most of the time, the passengers have to wait a long time for the bus. Moreover, as the bus is delayed, a person, standing in the last part of a long queue, can hardly manage to get into the available bus. Citizens are continuously complaining about missing important appointments as well as reaching office late. Since the current situation has been negatively affecting our lives, I expect a quick recovery scheme from your side.
As to fight back the scarcity of bus number, I would suggest your firm to go for immediate purchase of new buses to restore the bus-count to its previous position. Though salvaging the old buses will contribute in financing the purchase, major portion of the purchase can be obtained from local banks.
I look forward to receiving positive feedback from you soon.
With best regards,
Tasnim Fahmi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06912442396 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75288446332 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658986175115 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0021164541 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212270767394 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642006730471 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602279582044 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986052698259 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623355053994 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.