Visiting Iquique
Sometimes choose a place to visit is quite difficult, because there are a lot of factors that you have to take account before you make a decision. Perhaps, you prefer a relaxing place where you can take a rest or, may be, you like night parties where you can share with your friends. So, if you like beaches, nice weather and shopping in a place without taxes, may be visiting Iquique is a good choice. In this essay I will state some advantages and disadvantages that it is important to point out.
Iquique is located in the north of Chile. Almost all year has a good weather except during winter where it is a little cold. The city has some beaches where Cavancha is the best know. If you are an adventurous person and like extreme sports you can take some classes of surfing in Cavancha, or even, do paragliding in Dragon hill. Additionally, you should visit zofri mall where you will find some products cheaper than in Santiago, like perfumes and some drinks. But, be carefull with the pickpockets that they are in. Also, it is important to mention that if you are driving you must visit Pica and Humberstone Office, they are beautiful places near Iquique.
Finally, In Iquique you can find many activities and some beautiful places if you like beaches and desert landscapes. Moreover, If you like old buildings, you must go to downtown and walk across Baquedano Street. Eating fresh marine food is also a good election before leave Iquique, and you can some interesting places to eat in Downtown. But you avoid walking across downtown at night, because there are some areas without a good illumination and you could be a victim of an assault. I think that Iquique is the best choice for your next holiday.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6897689769 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46680187316 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3769323677 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8125 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138199297734 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633432181421 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833744543595 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111023174767 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292792402872 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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