A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say
- What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?
- Why do you need it back?
- What should he/she do about it?
Dear Rita,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health. It has been a long time since we have met, due to our sedentary lifestyle. Remember last month when you visited to my place you borrowed American Tourist's red suitcase as you were unable to pack all your clothes and gifts in one bag and you needed extra luggage.
You will be delighted to know that i am going to Paris on work visa for three years on 23rd september and as i am carrying some important and confidential documents with me i will be requiring that suitcase. The suitcase has many advantages as it has a bar code lock and many hidden pockets which will help me to safely keep all the papers. Additionally, it is made of waterproof leather which will protect the documents.
My sister Julie is visiting your town on 19th september and will be back by 21st september so i want you to kindly hand over the suitcase to her on airport by 5pm. She is boarding Air India Flight at 8 pm and her contact details are 9844556633.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours Loving
Prabhpreet Kaur
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- 10.A while ago you have lent a friend a suitcase, which he/she has not returned yet. Write a letter to him/her reminding to bring it back and say-What suitcase and when dud he/she borrow it?-Why do you need it back?-What should he/she do about it? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e. You will be delighted to know that i am going to Paris on work visa for thre...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or three years on 23rd september and as i am carrying some important and confiden...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tant and confidential documents with me i will be requiring that suitcase. The su...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r and will be back by 21st september so i want you to kindly hand over the suitca...
^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Hope to see you soon. Yours Loving Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours Loving Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47715736041 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43828195509 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670050761421 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6828641381 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171492002274 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057800786367 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420316920335 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993448387462 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407664233432 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.