Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?
These days sedentary lifestyle is becoming more and more popular despite a big number of sports facilities. This essay will first suggest the major problems caused by this phenomenon and suggest viable solutions.
The main problems associated with inactive lifestyle are obesity and various spine and knee issues. Now-a-days people are physically inactive that is they do not involve in any type of physical exercise thus increasing the risk of becoming overweight. Increasing in weight leads to many health issued such as diabetes and cardiovascular diseases. Moreover, the all day long sitting affects not only the backbne but also causes joints pain. People who spend most of their time sealed to one place and one chair in wrong posture may cause curve spine and various other issues such as osteoporosis and scoliosis. To exemplify, according to the recent studies more than 80 percent of people suffer from back and joint pain and some even have to go through kee replacement surgery.
In my opinion, the solutions to this worrying problems is to promote active lifestyle through various campaigns. People should be motivated to go to offices by riding cycles or through walking rather than driving cars. Furthermore, they should be made aware about the health effects through various advertisements and should be encouraged to undertake various exercising activities and to join gyms. Through regular physical exercising and walking will aid them to be more fit and healthy without any health issues. To elucidate, in many metropolitan citiies more tha 70 percent of people have become aware about importance daily workouts and benefits of riding cycle.
To conclude, the main problems associated with sedentary life is obesity and joints issues and this can be solved through everyday exercises and choosing to travel through bicycle instead of cars and other vehicles.
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Suggestion: Increasing
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Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3110367893 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64452286647 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1473211603 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149025070604 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554455943816 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715812037037 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117563462412 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799911045541 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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