1. With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Internet provide us the power to share our insight about a plethora of products and services. Several people agree that customers perceive it as a powerful means of sharing their views, whereas other opine that people uses it as a means of fiving false information. In my opinion, I do believe that online reviews can be beneficial and is considered as a deciding factor for customers.
Many individuals believe that by providing comments on the quality of a product or service online will provide a deeper understanding to the company about the product. This will be beneficial as based on the reviews they will take the necessary steps to improve the features of goods which will not only increase in the customer satisfaction and high customer retention but will also help the company to earn sustainable profits. Moreover, the remarks on the commodities will aid the people in making judgements regarding the buying. To elucidate, people before choosing the restaurants generally check online on websites like Zomato.com for the remarks made on the various dining places.
However, others agree that the online reviews are biased and not authentic. Many companies give false and misleading information about the goods of their competing firms in order to hamper their sales and profits. Furthermore, it affects the image of the company as people make wrong judgements about the goods and services of the organisation. To illustrate, a recent report as reflected that more than 80% of the information provided online on products are not genuine thus leading to customers making wrong purchases.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that online reviews are the reflection of the quality and feature of goods and it helps people in making correct decision before buying them
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king correct decision before buying them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, whereas, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 937.175257732 159% => OK
No of words: 288.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18402777778 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76709534483 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 290.88556701 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1123804205 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.416666667 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135387854032 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498153134791 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342268854883 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846463368078 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196069386994 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 70.7449484536 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 41.2886597938 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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