Nowadays, more and more people in the world live an inactive lifestyle despite the ubiquity of gyms. Several problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by several effective solutions.
The main issue is that this sedentary lifestyle has an adverse effect on our health. As people do not exercise and just sit all day on a chair, the mechanism can be slower which makes the accumulation of excess fat; thereby, they are more likely to be susceptible to obesity, diabetes, and cancer. For instance, when watching TV, people tend to eat more snacks as a way to bring a more pleasurable and comfortable so that they will easily have an unhealthy diet and this harmful food may have negative impacts on both physical and mental health problems.
Since such issues are serious, the community and individuals should immediately take steps to address these problems. The first solution could be tackled by individuals. People must change their daily habits, especially diet and exercise. For instance, they have to exercise on a regular basis by some useful workouts like jogging, cardio and running in the morning and eat more healthy food like vegetables, fruits and drink more water; get rid of all fast food and processed food. By all these measures, people can easily get more healthy and happy; all communities will have better health. Moreover, another solution would be depend on the gym's services. They have to encourage people in the communities to use gyms by some attractions like discounts or launch an advertisement campaign about their gyms and raise people's awareness of the importance of having good health.
In conclusion, there are various negative consequences of this sedentary lifestyle and appropriate steps need to be taken to tackle these problems ( not only by the business but also by individuals).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09240924092 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68025408134 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4683402831 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104051777148 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470201897443 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400941902647 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822439689095 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274357115321 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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