The given line graph illustrates the count of below the earth plartform's people during a day in London. An interesting point to be noted that this numbers fluctuated throughout the day.
Overall analysis, 7:30 A.M in the morning along with the 4:30 p.m in the evening are the pick hours while 6 A.M and 4 o'clock in the evening there are less passengers. Furthermore, x axis indicates the time periods whereas the count of the passengers are represented by y axix.
It is manifest that, when it comes to the travellers count, it began at 100 in 6 A.M and then peaked at 400 in half past seven in the morning before decreasing to around 150 in 10 22.00 in the late evening. Additionally, the count declines sharply from around 380 to approximately 135 during 17:30 to 19:30 in the evening.
Stating further, the lowest count of passengers is 100, which can be seen at 5:30 A.M as well as 15:30.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...ut the day. Overall analysis, 7:30 A.M in the morning along with the 4:30 p.m ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...he evening are the pick hours while 6 A.M and 4 oclock in the evening there are l...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...ng are the pick hours while 6 A.M and 4 oclock in the evening there are less passenger...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun passengers is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...M and 4 oclock in the evening there are less passengers. Furthermore, x axis indicat...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...ravellers count, it began at 100 in 6 A.M and then peaked at 400 in half past sev...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...ers is 100, which can be seen at 5:30 A.M as well as 15:30.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, then, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60248447205 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.668104945 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658385093168 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.519584582 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0857153180438 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431458868073 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433014818018 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555646694244 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499462612357 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.