You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
• explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
• say how your work could be done while you are away
• ask for his/her help in arranging it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to seek your permission for allowing me to work in the headquarters of the company in America for six months. I would like to mention the reason behind it in detail.
Since, our company is planning to expand the global reach of the products if I get the opportunity to work in the headquarters of the organisation it will definitely help me to enhance my skills and expertise. Moreover, it will not only allow me to gain knowledge of trade strategies, regulations and tariffs but also the products’ global market trends deeply
I have talked to Shweta junior sales manager. She agreed to take on my responsibilities during my absence. Furthermore, I shall check my emails and shall be available for emergency calls. Once I get back to work, I would endeavour to work extra hours to catch up on anything I missed.
I would need your support to get all the necessary approvals and email confirmation and further if you could assist me to make arrangements for travel and accommodations. Kindly guide me on the reimbursement policy of flights and hotels of the organisation.
I hope you will consider me suitable for working in the company’s head office. I look forward to hearing from you
Yours sincerely,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou Yours sincerely, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9400921659 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10288512704 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617511520737 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2708237827 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275283230612 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962700369085 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088626365019 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154301856943 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893595180078 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.