Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:
Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about
Explain why would they be of interest to the students
Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk
This is Sarika Kumari, I am a student of St.Marie college. I recently saw an advertisement for your upcoming event about the international day. An international day is celebrated and recognised for different countries and their cultures. I am from India and as India is a very big country with diverse multicultural values. I would like to talk about Indian multicultural diversity.
India is very well-known for its diverse culture and history. It is always in news and explained in many books about its culture. Many people from different countries like to learn more about Indian culture. So, I think it could be one of the attractive talks in your event.
I would also like to ask you about the stage arrangement. I would require a mike and projector for a small presentation. Please let me know if you could add me in your plan.
Waiting to for your reply,
Yours faithfully
Sarika Kumari
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- Write a letter to the college head In your letter Tell him her about the topics that you are going to talk about Explain why would they be of interest to the students Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk 81
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Marie
... is Sarika Kumari, I am a student of St.Marie college. I recently saw an advertisemen...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94152260521 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.2985543 44.8134815571 27% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.6923076923 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8461538462 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187790258823 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706022281084 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655877433078 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107758005885 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465284178921 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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