Some people think that they can be encouraged through sporting events like olympics. Others think that there are more better ways to encourage adults for exercise. Discuss both and give your opinion.
global sport events reappear to the mass people after a long waiting time, making everyone crazy to enjoy the moments of the programs. such arrangements are thought to be motivating young adults to perform physical exercise, but then again, many question the effectiveness of sport events and emphasize on different ways to encourage individuals to workout daily. In this essay, both of these views will be discussed, followed by my opinion.
programs like World Cups and olympics are the largest contests of variety of sports, bringing the best persons of each category on the arena from countries, fighting to become the very best. In the process, competition is being promoted among the sport enthusiasts which aslo empowers them to engage themselves in their favorite sports. such competition transforms a random person to a sporty individual who attempts to climb up of his current league in sport. Regarding physical exercises, sports provides both the enjoyment and the benefits of exercise and global sport events are vital to encourage youngs in sports.
On the other hand, people believing that international sport events have less impact in bringing people outside for exercise highlight the the role of social campaign and exercise groups. Firstly, social campaigns targets specific diseases and explains how regular exercise can reduce the probability of suffering from such diseases. members of the society, for instance, are being shared with the information on how walking or jogging in the morning can reduce the blood sugar level as well as increase the effectiveness of heart. The more people become aware of the remedy, the larger number of people will start regular exercises. Secondly, the role of exercise groups is also vital. To explain, everyone loves to work in a group, so doing exercise in a team reduces the stress of work-outs and lets the members enjoy it. motivating everyone through social campaign and exercise groups can provide impressive results in bringing people out of their houses for a morning-walk.
In my opinion, both of the ways have their appeal and uniqueness. To motivate youngs, sports events are vital as everyone loves sports at young age. However, a mid-aged person will prefer to walk or jog with a group to stay fit.
To Conclude, events like olympic are accepted by global people. Though social campaigns and exercise groups motivate people for daily exercises, global sport events encourage thousands of youngsters to spend times in engaging themselves in their favorite sports.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28992628993 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64651899814 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535626535627 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6537588499 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.315789474 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4210526316 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239827923414 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730536097698 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517706724817 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138987650919 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391511389111 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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