You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter
introduce yourself and say when the incident happened
describe what you saw and heard
say what you would like the bus company to do about it
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the arrogant driving and rude behavior of Mr. Jason, the driver of Coach GT201.
I am regular passenger of your “T&L Transportation Service” and my usual pick-up point is Highstreet Station. I never experienced any hassle in public transports until yesterday, when I got into the mentioned coach. Right after getting a seat, I observed the driver shifting lanes spontaneously, making everyone uncomfortable. Moreover, he had narrow escapes from two accidents during the 20-minute-ride. Though most of the passengers warned him not to drive crazy, he used slang to silent the protesters. As your company operates bus services with strong reputation, I decided to complain about that specific driver to ensure the safety of the public.
Drivers like Mr. Jason are required to be sent for counselling immediately to avoid any casualty. I expect you will take this issue very seriously as well as professionally.
I look forward to receiving user-friendly services from your company.
Yours faithfully,
Tasnim Fahmi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f Mr. Jason, the driver of Coach GT201. I am regular passenger of your 'T&L...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...al pick-up point is Highstreet Station. I never experienced any hassle in public ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49704142012 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15173058701 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.757396449704 0.622605031667 122% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4104157885 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4545454545 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160998367347 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531770849699 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421594620277 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816203034027 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018624481248 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 8.71597938144 161% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.