Misics brings people together irrespective of cultures and ages.
In Modern era, music is becoming an essential part of everyday life. Very common opinion is that music is a platform that Unites the people of various cultures and ages. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and offer an overall opinion.
There are variety of reasons why people believe that, music can bring people together respect of religions and ages. Perhaps, they may have strong as in believing this point is because they would have seen the people in music band. A good illustration of this is during concerts one can see various artists jointly playing the band as well as people who are of the stage also enjoy together without looking for any age reservation and culture as well.
Despite that, consider and audio release offer respect to film, the actress of the film are forced to sit in the front row leaving common people in the black rows. One should not forget the situation where discrimination over people takes place but it depends on the type of festival or concerts.
In conclusion, it must be said that the topic music bring people together without depending on culture and ages has both pros and cons. Therefore to all the opinions put forth above, I would like to close music unite people, although it shows discrimination as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ulture and ages has both pros and cons. Therefore to all the opinions put forth above, I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77375565611 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34496559882 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619909502262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6818141188 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261217671961 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104536531046 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110057997782 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145305582905 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659673770474 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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