You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.
"Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsiblefor deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsiblefor bringing the children up."
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Undoubtedly, men and women are both play a crucial part on the children's formations since the first day of humanity. However, some people state that father and mother should share an equal responsibility on the child; others believe that only the mother is responsible for raising the baby due to her single decision whether or not to pregnant. Personally, I agree with the view that both parents ought to raise the kid together for the following reasons.
Firstly, it is clear that a woman cannot create a baby by herself, there is certainly a man participating in that process. Thus, sharing a home as well as the duty of nourishing the child forms a family - the core of the society. Besides, leaving a single mom with an unborn child alone is morally unacceptable. On the whole, to stabilize the society, a nuclear family with fully mom and dad will be indispensable.
Turning to the kid's beneficial development, they deserve a roof where protection and familyhood serve as the basic requirement. Children in general are frail, a decent guidance would be essential to grow a warmhearted person. Meanwhile motherliness is warm and tender, fatherliness on the other hand is gentle but also stern. Both of them are equally necessary.
In conclusion, equally shared parenting ensures a peaceful development for the kids as well as the society. Instead of laying a heavy burden on the women's shoulder, the men must partake with his partner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ing the baby due to her single decision whether or not to pregnant. Personally, I agree with t...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...essential to grow a warmhearted person. Meanwhile motherliness is warm and tender, father...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in general, as well as, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97107438017 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90110322792 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648760330579 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4068070895 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5384615385 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0818141509958 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257782435667 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274440570912 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0444132745414 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211677842054 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.