Dear Sir or Madam,
My family and I are moving to your city and we would need rented accommodation and we would need your assistance to find the perfect accommodation for us.
As an introduction, I am a chartered accountant (CA) by profession and I was working in India and now I am moving to London for my new role. I have with me my beautiful wife, who is also a chartered accountant (CA) and one son aged 8. My son is in class 3, he enjoys playing with other kids.
We would need 2 story building near the main city of London where my office is situated. The building should have 3 bedrooms, 2 washrooms and open trace for all the rooms. One important thing, we do not want to share our building, it should be independent. Furthermore, it would be great if you can find a building with the garden and some open area for parking.
Considering we have a son who goes to school, we prepare an area near the good school. We would prefer an area near our office location and are with the cooperative neighborhood. Further, consideration must be given to my son who wants to play in the park and open area.
I hope the above information helps you find accommodation suitable for us. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincere thanks
Binod Khatri
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...commodation for us. As an introduction, I am a chartered accountant CA by profes...
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...d to hearing from you. Sincere thanks Binod Khatri
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47826086957 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74245484942 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7323525731 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5714285714 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163386958191 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057600582855 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886532180854 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124287811605 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122160065879 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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