One of your friends ask you to be a partner in his new business.
write a letter to reply him:
- give your opinion about your friend's business idea
- tell him weather or not you have decided to accept his offer
- and explain your reason for this decision
Dear Steve,
I hope you are doing good. Happy to receive a mail from you. Thanks for choosing me to be as your partner for your new venture. I am replying back to let you know my opinion on this.
It was a great business idea by the way, The presentation you have provided by explaining whole point of business is crystal clear. I can imagine how it is going to run. Even though, cab companies are already a lot in our city, the unique ideas you have mentioned on the document are going to be the selling points which bring's high profits in return.
I would like to tell you an example. One of my relative recently started food delivery company in Mumbai. He's yielding around twenty percent margins every month by applying his unique ideas in the business.
Even though the idea is great, I am sorry to reject your offer. Currently I was totally involved in our hotel venture. I am spending more than eight hours a day in travel for visiting all the recently started restaurants in the nearby towns. With such busy schedule in a week, I cannot spend time to manage other new business. Hope you can understand the situation. All the very best for your new business. Write me if you need help in any other means.
Thanks,
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Steve, I hope you are doing good. Happy to rece...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ack to let you know my opinion on this. It was a great business idea by the way,...
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Line 11, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: He's
...tarted food delivery company in Mumbai. Hes yielding around twenty percent margins ...
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Line 19, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d help in any other means. Thanks, John.
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Line 21, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any other means. Thanks, John.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56194690265 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33135458277 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637168141593 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8588355738 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6470588235 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2941176471 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05882352941 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324731077718 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853893954935 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791054949717 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184891195138 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816451120795 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.