You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter:
• Explain where your apartment is
• Describe the room
• What kind of person would you like to rent it to.
Dear Sir,
I am John from Singapore, Pursuing 2nd year in Oxford University. I wish to inform you about a vacant room in my apartment and I need your help to offer it for rent for any university student.
I live in Sunflower apartments near to the Times Square building. The apartment is in the central location of Singapore. It takes around 5 minutes to walk to the nearest metro station and ten minutes to the bus interchange. The apartment has all the amenities like a grocery store, swimming pool, and a private gym. The flat has 3 bedrooms, a living room beside a small kitchen.
The vacant room is quite spacious, has large windows, partially furnished with a bed and a table. An attached washroom and an air-conditioner are equipped in the room. The Internet and the washing area is common for all the inmates.
I would like to offer the room for a person who can speak English and preferably an Asian. Restrictions on cooking. Good to have a roommate who doesn't drink and work in the night shifts. Please help me in finding a roommate and give my contact number if anyone is interested in.
Thanks,
John.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r rent for any university student. I live in Sunflower apartments near to th...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iving room beside a small kitchen. The vacant room is quite spacious, has larg...
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Line 17, column 145, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...on cooking. Good to have a roommate who doesnt drink and work in the night shifts. Ple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.705 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69414179285 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8416155342 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2142857143 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 4.34317383033 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182593303579 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470762481033 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605813346653 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10077057139 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06000319251 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.