You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student. Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college. In your letter:
-Explain where your apartment is
-Describe the room
-What kind of person would you like to rent it to.
Dear Sir,
I am Rachel, owner of three bedroom flat near the Nirma Institue. I am writing you this letter to inform you about the availability of a room for the rent.
My apartment is at 6th lane, University road. It is a well furnished flat with facilities of maid and cook. Currently, only 2 female students are living and there is a vacancy for one more person. The room has attached bath and consist of one queen size bed, a wooden wardrobe, and a study table along with a chair. The cost of room is same for all the occupants and is non negotiable. In addition, the bills of electricity and gases will be divided among the tentants along with the society maintainence
It would be great if you could let me know about any student who is searching for the accomodation. I would prefer a college going female student. She should be mature, responsible,and a sensible tenant who maintains the property as if its her own. I do not prefer the person who does late night parties, as it would distrub the other tenants.
Looking forward for your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Richa Mahajan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...udent. She should be mature, responsible,and a sensible tenant who maintains the pro...
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Line 13, column 237, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...tenant who maintains the property as if its her own. I do not prefer the person who...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70256410256 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63364165673 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671794871795 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0679991718 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5384615385 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21059718654 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686338230539 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655314327098 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114833485914 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545165945094 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.