There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need
music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is loved and enjoyed by people of all the age group. It's hard to imagine life without music, it's like a shower without water.
There are a different type of music practiced and listened everywhere. Each country has it own cultural and traditional music. To illustrate, in India traditional music consist of classical raga , taals and bhajans and, international music for it is pop and jazz.
Music has became an essential part of our lives.We need music as it enhances our mental health and boost our immunity. Researchers have shown that listening to soft and calm music reduces stress, lowers blood pressure and increases the realease of happy hormones. Without music humna life would be dull and miserable death of silence.
Nowadays, people especially children and youngsters are more inclined towards the foreign music. The pop music is made very catchy, loud and attractive to lure public towards it. From the costumes of actors to the background are made to entertain people. Most of people forget that its a product that is marketed for the business purpose. It focus on revenue generating capacity and lyrics doesnt have any meaning.
According to my prespective the traditional music is far more valuable then the international music. First of all, folk music has its root embedded deep in the culture of the particular country. It represent the history, norms, wars and the stories of struggles and victories. So, traditional music keeps us connected to our cultural value. The local music played during various religious ceremonies like marriage, funeral or festival, add soul to them which can never be replaced by international music. Secondly, it increases our love for our land and enhances our nationality. It inculcates of sense of patriotism and respect for our country.
To conculde, music has became an indespensable part of our life . Although people prefer rock and pop music, nothing can replace the traditional music of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.209375 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73732881132 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2641392978 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7727272727 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5454545455 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31818181818 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350489273773 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117997628573 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942015124758 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210966579493 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088567313181 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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