It is an undeniable truth that money and happiness are two equal companions in any human life. Few might argue that wealth plays a vital role in pleasure while others differ with that statement and say currency notes have no place in delight. In my opinion, in digital age cash has been crucial for livelihood and it will be the key for contentment.
Nowadays, humans are living in the digital era where materialistic lifestyle eclipsed human relations and it bought a whole new dimension of living alone. In these circumstances, everyone needs disposable income to lead their life in harmony by owning luxury items such as cars, gadgets, etc…. eventually these would bring joy. On top of this, millennials are more enthusiastic in traveling worldwide to unwind themselves. Without deep pockets, it would be extremely difficult to fulfill the carving on travel.
Apart from these, earning million of bucks could high rise the status symbol in society and as a result, they might receive extraordinary benefits for instance VIP treatment, compared to less salaried citizens. On the other hand, rich people have the flexibility to provide not only financial security but also an excellent future for their respective families. For example, studying in International School is so expansive that below-par earning employees cannot afford this kind of education to their adolescents. In the end, living happily without finance was the past thing and modern age no longer has that feasibility.
To conclude, prosperity has created a new sophisticated platform to lead the life in joy. With assistance from fortune everyone can fulfill their excitements by buying the products they want as well as luxury trips.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little might'.
Suggestion: Little might
...two equal companions in any human life. Few might argue that wealth plays a vital role in...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Eventually
...xury items such as cars, gadgets, etc…. eventually these would bring joy. On top of this, ...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...on travel. Apart from these, earning million of bucks could high rise the status sym...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81385944188 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1468252055 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0857832695551 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025045827728 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292135158686 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0488661389192 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416492563949 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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