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The advertising director of the super screen movie thinks that their movies are in good quality but don't get enough number of viewers because of the lack in public awareness about that movies. That's why wants to allocate greater share of movies budget in advertising. However, inorder to evaluate the situation and taking necessary precautions he really needs to answer these questions.
First, the advertising director says that the movies get a lot of positive reviews from the movie reviewers, but the way movie reviewers critics a movie is very different from the most of the general viewers. So, the company needs to to know the what the general people tink about these movies. For instance, most of the movies get the oscar award gets to know by people after it's getting the prize. People generally like entertainment in watching movies not all of them but most of the people. So, inorder to get most of the viewers the producer needs to make movies according to the customers demand not by the movie reviewrs critics. So, in case those movies get positive reviews from movie reviewers are not of pulic demand than it will creat a big question mark on the passge argument.
Secondly, in this world of social media isn't it very easy to get news about anything? Do really public don't know about those movies? It is very difficult to say that people don't hear about a movie which is very good quality. May be it can be arguebly say that the bad review of that is well knownn by the public so that they dont go to see that movie. For example, a prson will not go to theater and spend money watching a poor movie which he had already known from the social media. So, it makes the evaluation by the advertisement director very much flawed if this question has some merits in it's position.
In conclusion, many would argue that advertisement is vry much needed for a movie, so that pulic hear about it. But inorder to do that ypu can't degrade the quality of movie. So the director really needs to think about those precaution and find answer to those questions before taking any measurements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65498652291 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39294206105 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479784366577 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5660945211 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9444444444 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0621982245805 0.243740707755 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248743866647 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349455814979 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385101117736 0.150359130593 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231730410111 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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