You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• thank him for the invitation
• mention why you can not attend the birthday party
• offer to meet him some other day
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Robert,
Hello, how are you? I am writing this letter to express my happiness on the 8th Birthday party of Julie. I wish her best in life but I apologise that I will not be able to attend the birthday party
I wish Julie a very Happy Birthday. May all her wishes and desires come true. I would also like to thank you for inviting me to her birthday party. I owe her a birthday present do let me know her choices and preferences?
I express my regret as I will not be a part of birthday party as last month, I was promoted to the position of senior manager in my organisation and I have to manage all the work and ensure that there are no faults. Moreover, since it is the end of the financial year there is a lot of work pressure and many crucial projects of the organisation has to be completed within the deadline to ensure company’s growth an investor’s satisfaction.
I will organise all my work in the office and will plan a visit to meet you and Julie in Canada next month. I will try to stay with you for a couple of days.
Once again, I ask for forgiveness for not being a part of Julie’s Birthday party.
I hope to see you soon. Take care.
Best wishes,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not be able to attend the birthday party I wish Julie a very Happy Birthday. May ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...be able to attend the birthday party I wish Julie a very Happy Birthday. May a...
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Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et me know her choices and preferences? I express my regret as I will not be a ...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... know her choices and preferences? I express my regret as I will not be a pa...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e care. Best wishes, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34934497817 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6460431956 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563318777293 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7121505864 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6153846154 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159060449437 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626681476599 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557609515334 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879205107295 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581787807239 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.