In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
In recent years, people have developed a number of useful farming methods and researched a variety of food knowledge in agriculture. These consequences make us have lots of food to eat, however, some people in developing countries continue to suffer and even die from hunger because of development of agriculture and poverty.
In developing countries, the gap between the rich and the poor is so big that the distribution of food is highly unfair. The rich enjoy delicious meals every day, while the poor do not have enough food to eat. Besides, the poor are too poor to buy modern equipment for agriculture and they do not have the latest knowledge and skills to plant food, not to mention people living in barren areas and places where usually suffer from climate change. Take Africa for example, most people live in unfertilized areas, they could not grow any plants up. Also, the lack of the infrastructures is another big problem, they have problems intruding water and take good use of soil.
These problem could be tackle by some solutions. Firstly, the local government can build some useful infrastructure and buy equipment to the local and ensure the agricultural system can work. Secondly, experts and farmers from development countries can train local people in need useful skills and knowledge about the plants like how to take good care of them, what kinds of plants are suitable for these areas and so on. Last but not the least, we can take advantage of transport by transforming foods from developed countries which are closed to the relevant national borders. These solutions may help people around the world to have enough food to eat.
In conclusion, through the aids of governments, experts and transportation, it would deal with the hunger problem around the world.
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- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? 73
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'These problems'?
Suggestion: This problem; These problems
...g water and take good use of soil. These problem could be tackle by some solutions. Firs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04013377926 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68697408916 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8536258552 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116978487606 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484760591258 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345290236135 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078518300998 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380098985884 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.