Nowadays people show more anti social behavior and lack of respect to others. What are the causes of this? How we can improve it?
A conspicuous trend of increasing anti-social and disrespectful behavior is being observed. however, with the rising globalization, xenophobic mentality and gender gaps have become the core causes of it. however, there is only key solution to improve the situation is by educating at all levels.
there are innumerable causes for such an asocial activity. Primarily, with globalization and lack of knowledge, people have developed xenophobia towards the immigrant communities. In other words, they have developed stereotypes about migrant societies and also believe that they will steal away their jobs. Fuelling to this ideology is the social media campaigns, reaching every nook and corner of this planet, conditioning the minds of the masses. For instance, investigations of some of gory mass murders reveal that the convicts were impacted by social media.
How can such abuses be prevented? Regarding this radical ideology, the effective solution is educating at the primary level about communal harmony. Consequently, children will learn to respect the social diversity around them. In order to protect these communities, government must introduce cyber laws to nip these social media campaigns. At the same time, aid them in becoming the part of vibrant civilization by educating the locals and clearing misconceptions. For example, the Canadian government is currently aiding settlement of the refugees from Syria through mass education on social media about their situation and urging societies to be cooperative.
In conclusion, although hatred is on the rise, yet education to all segments and administrative steps can tackle this amplified menace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.696 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.046739897 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2947195425 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179586793653 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559923271978 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393834455119 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971502639673 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192012163274 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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