You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
- Give details of the job
- Explain why it is important to you
- Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Mr. Ma
Thank you for your kindly teaching and help in the past 4 years. I am writing this letter with regards to a reference letter which is needed for my job hunting.
I am now applying for a position of project manager in a company called NTT communications. The main duty of the job is to manage the international operation of their cloud services, and execute the projects in the data centers all in China, Japan, Europe as well as America.
My old brother also works in NTT and he recommended that the people there are so nice, and it is a good place to accumulate experience in the field of cloud service. As I am interested in this field for quite a long time and would like to work in Japan, I really hope I can be a member of NTT communications. A recommendation is necessary for applying the job. I appreciate it a lot if you could provide me with a letter of reference. My experience of studying as an exchange student in Japan, knowledge background in cloud services, language ability can be described in the letter.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ingrid
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| 2019-11-26 | shcumihuhu | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Ingrid
^^^^
Line 19, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom you. Yours sincerely, Ingrid
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58208955224 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87322801424 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7883308 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7272727273 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26143073392 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104097898982 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841272662936 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150834771118 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105998045007 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.