The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The chart gives information about average proportions of three major elements in our daily meals (sodium, saturated fat and sugar) in USA, which have bad effects on our health if they eaten in high quantity.Overall, sodium have the highest and the lowest percentages when compared to other elements.
The percentage of sodium in breakfast is the lowest between the other elements, which is 14 %, while saturated fats and sugar have an equal value of 16 %.In addition to sodium lowest point
in dinner, also sodium has the same percent in regular snacks. On the other hand, the by far the highest percent goes to sugar with 42%, while the saturated fats have 21%.
The dinner is conquered by the sodium with a percent equal to 43, while saturated fat comes in the second place with 37 % and the sugar with 23 %. In addition to dinner, lunch also has sodium as the highest value by 29%, then come the saturated fat and sugar with 26% and 19%, respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, then, while, in addition, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76047904192 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48664251622 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538922155689 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5054480712 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.2 5.23603664747 328% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0692567452766 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376234665919 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572466858837 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489745818694 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603281772994 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.