Some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.
Is this a positive or negative trend?
In today's modern world, sporting and cultural events tickets sales have soared up more than ever before. In my opinion, I strongly believe that spending money on such events is advantageous for many reasons.
A plausible reason is that these events can create jobs for a considerable number of people. This is because several industries are primarily based on these types of events such as the sports and film making industry. For example, the Premiere League in England is considered to be one of the main pillars of the English economy, meaning that numerous people are being hired every year in professions such medical, media, sales and marketing, etc . If this trend continues, this can lead, in turn, to a thrived economy.
Another point to consider is that the tendency of the public to attend such events can encourage more people to take part in these types of event . The reason for this is that they have a valuable chance to be seen by masses and become successful and popular celebrities later in their future. Elsawy Cultural Center in Egypt, for example, is a place where young people gather and perform various forms of arts ranging from singing to poetry. As a result, this would lead to a prospect that numerous talents could be discovered.
Finally, people's expenditure on these events can be greatly beneficial for the society as a substantial portion of money spent sometimes be allocated to charities and hospitals. This has been seen happening recently during the Champions League football tournament in which a massive amount of the revenue collected was raised for women who were diagnosed with breast cancer and people with disabilities. As such, this would allow people to come together, thus creating a societal cohesion.
In a conclusion, I wholeheartedly believe that public spending on cultural and sporting events plays a key role in improving society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10897435897 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66193463097 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.308320997 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.857142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186098104086 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681996513624 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396957853529 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112993162792 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203743520369 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.