Aluminum Recycling
Needless to say that the recycling process plays an important role in our modern life. By gradual increasing of the waste products and the subsequent lack of ideal methods for getting rid of them, as well as the impact on our environment if we simply dump these wastes in our land or the see, recycling seems to be a suitable idea for reusing the previously used materials or the 2nd hand equipment.
One of the most important modern industries is the aluminum industry which highly depends on the recycling.1st of all , the waste products are separated with the isolation of the aluminum cans in special containers before being directed to the recycling stations, where they got cleaned, sorted, shredded and finally compressed. The heating process is performed in special huge ovens before getting melted and directed to another machine for rolling stage. The rolling size is different from factory to another ,but it is usually between 2.5mm & 6 mm thick.
Many international companies are concerned with this modern industry which provides the market in the UK with about 74 % of their needs of the aluminum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02162162162 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69501388103 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664864864865 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.1795509837 44.8134815571 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.833333333 76.5299724578 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 16.8248392259 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219510950809 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889405102217 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854578187249 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125904063134 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359527195119 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 8.37731958763 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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