You have recently landed in a foreign country on work visa and interested in seeking information guide about the place in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider for seeing help and in your letter. write
• why you are writing the letter.
• what kind of information you want?
• how and when you can get requested information
Dear Mr.Smith,
First of all, let me thank you for giving such an excellent job opportunity. I am writing this letter to seek extended assistance from you.
As you already know, I am new to New Zealand as a matter of fact; this is my first aboard work location. On that account, could you please provide me further insights about the place. These details are imperative for not only settling but also to lead my life in harmony.
First, I would like to know about the public transport system to commute to the workplace. Secondly, are there any Indian grocery shops or restaurants near to our office? Furthermore, can I get a travel guide book or a website that contains top tourist destinations?
I request you take this as a priority subject. Can you please confirm the preferred mode of correspondence how and when can I can have these particulars; would it be either through email or by a phone call? Do let me know, if necessary I will text you my local phone number.
I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,
Sudheerkumar Motakatla
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| 2019-11-28 | sudheerssmg | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, First of all, let me thank you fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85945945946 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76171255663 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708108108108 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5311436163 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1538461538 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217329393633 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716141285634 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734124862151 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888755425692 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779308288878 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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