Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while others think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In recent decades, living conditions are getting better. This leads to the fact that needs in terms of playing sports and entertainment activities are on the rise. While a larger variety of people join in sports that are performed by a group, the majority of individuals prefer participating in personal sports. From my perspective, I am in favor of those who support the former view. In the following essay, I will present reasons to demonstrate my opinions.
On the one hand, It cannot deny the fact that people and society would reap certainly optimistic about playing single sports. For the best, athletes not only have a huge income from their favorite sports but also become a good model for youngsters generation. This can be illustrated by Roger Federer who was an acclaimed internationally player in tennis. He won a number of championships throughout more than 20 years of his career. Besides, he also earned millions of dollars from those awards. What is more, the more people play games, the more taxes obtained they contribute to the government, which means the national budget can be allocated for urgent issues such as education, crime, and infrastructure.
On the other hand, despite the obvious merits of individual sports, however, team sports sometimes become an essential part that is dispensable of public activities. Evidently, in an abundance of countries, especially developing nations, soccer plays a vital role in the economy and it is also a religion in those countries. For example, in Brazil, a South American nation, football is an important industry because it is not only the most common sport but also creates thousands of jobs for employees from all strata. Not to mention that team sports can gather and narrow the distance between people.
In conclusion, It seems to me that team sports bring more advantages than individual games. Therefore, I agree with the ideas that support to play group sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10971786834 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82662336164 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617554858934 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6646728854 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8823529412 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162357537528 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467680616108 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409266455618 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099044257773 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109819842995 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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