Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy?
In recent years, celebrities should have more than privacy and less than caution by paparazzi, because, they are treated unfairly on the internet by the media. The famous person who is soccer player, singer, poet they need more equal than in the present. I agree with apart the question. Besides, treated unfairly by the social media, some news or stories are written by the information of celebrity.
There are several issues and it depends on the writer who are public the post of celebrity. First of all, famous people give the information to paparazzi than to helping them have more influent on the social network. Because the magazine will publish some articles about the information which are received from reporter. For instance, the singer tells some mystery of them for the reporter, then a post will be published by the writer tomorrow by the information they are received before. Because showbiz or market entertainment is one of the most difficult in the world. The company in the entertainment usually introduce the new actor or singer daily. That is the reason why celebrities tell their mystery to attractive netizen.
On the other hand, influencer still normal person who are own four emotions such as angry, happy, sadness, etc. Almost them are not happy because every activity is been caution by media. For example, the couple Hariwon and Tran Thanh are followed by the paparazzies and the post about them appear on the internet and newspaper daily. Moreover, celebrities must feel happy anytime and anywhere in front of everybody. My point of view, famous person has a lot of stressful but they cannot express the real emotion of them.
In general, famous people have to deal with treatment which is not equal like everybody especially is private. Nevertheless, that is the price of their fame because the life is unfairly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve more influent on the social network. Because the magazine will publish some articles...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in general, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04220779221 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55192326745 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551948051948 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2224137925 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24721755227 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590935633561 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839878127864 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140579080706 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120236981453 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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