Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, Teenage years are becoming quite challenging for most children and future generations. Adding to this, the great variation between ways, that they have been emerged currently, pairing themselves with their mates which might be conflicting and causing struggle. Also, dealing with rival pressure, fearing of academic and social failure, and trying to cope with overwhelming stress.
The question raising here is; whether our teenage years have been the best time periods of our life with all its whites and darks or adult life is the best among, and in order to answer this substantial matter, we got to disclose all the aspects of each one.
Starting with the teenager's life, which some of us consider as their preferable time periods, where they had no responsibilities or even pressures on them. As, all it could matter since then is, how we can spend more time outside the bed, gaming, gathering with colleagues for an outing, claiming illness in order to skip a school day, or even complaining of mother’s food. While, mature life is completely different and irrelevant to the mentioned one, where mindset becomes more mature and adult. Moreover, the ability to work out your own issues without any assistance or requesting help from others, taking more responsibilities and burdens.
Collectively, we could never neglect the fact that mature life is amazing and full of magnificent memories that are hardly erased or replaced, but adult life is as more of great interest as teenage life, except for it is an extent for how much we can bear and fight solemnly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
...spects of each one. Starting with the teenagers life, which some of us consider as thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07662835249 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69847154017 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651340996169 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9217596867 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.222222222 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140519848375 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575260410578 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350616190526 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822742852261 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282619335701 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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