The graph below give information about water use worldwide.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
Displayed in the line graph arethe amount of water utilized by 3 selected industries globally from 1900 to 2000.
Overall, it is apparent that from the 3 major sectors worldwide there was a drastic growth in then the consumption fo water across the given period.
Looking closely, in the year 1900 the world the greatest purpose of water were for agriculture which stood at approximately 500km, This amount gradually grew to roughly around 1600km during 1960. Four decades later, figures rose steeply to an astounding 3200km. In contrast, the use of water amongst homes all over the world constituted to a minute portion with almost zero km, which remained until the 1960s. In the following 40 years usage significantly incline and settling to more or less 200km. Similarly, factories also consume water to minute 1km, wherein it remained and lasted for 4 decades. However, by the beginning of 1950 data dramatically increased to 400km before reaching its peak to 1100km by 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, similarly, so, then, in contrast, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63145476568 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.728395061728 0.547539520022 133% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6682605634 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0797221797076 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305940084165 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332486174884 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597634008325 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320385002564 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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