The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given line charts indicate the changes in owning electrical appliances and the amount of time spending doing housework in a specific nation between 1920 and 2019.
Overall, people owned more and more washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner since 1920. However, each family gave less time on doing housework afterwards.
The trend buying electrical appliances rose significantly since 1920. In the first year, approximate 0 percent of families were equipped refrigerator. But during the 1920 and 1980 period, the demanding having this machine increased extremely. Vacuum also had a moment. Owing vacuum cleaner rose from 30 percent to 100 percent in early 2019, sharing the same stage with refrigerator. Compared to those appliances, washing machine just increased gradually and reached 75 percent in the last year.
In contrast to the growth of having electrical appliances, the number of hours of housework per week decreased gradually. In 1920, people spent normally 50 hours per week, but the data declined significantly until 1960, accounting for 20 hours. After that the number fluctuated around 10 and 20 hours, and reached 10 hours in the last reported year, which means, the data dropped 40 percent since 1920.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40721649485 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69900864722 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6772662077 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4166666667 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184059066551 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666253980341 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899657813317 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139218498724 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115459759053 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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