Your mentor recommended you to learn a new language and gave you contact details of a teacher.
Following his advise, you need to write a letter to the teacher.In your letter say.
What is your motivation to learn a new language?
How can the teacher help you?
When will you be ready to start?
Dear Mr Gupta,
I am writing to let you know that I am very much interested in one of your course that helps individuals in learning French. Your name was suggested by my boss and guide Mr Pandey when he learnt about my interest in the language.
Let me explain my situation. I am working for a company which regularly deals with French clients. Therefore, It is very important for me to understand it, in order to communicate with them effectively. Moreover, I had a keen interest in the dialect since my childhood, as I was fascinated by French movies and shows.
I would be extremely grateful to you if you enrol me in one of your crash courses, where I can acquire your in-depth knowledge and skill to learn and understand the language quickly.
As I am very much keen to master it. I would like to start the course as early as possible. Apart from this, I have a meeting lined up with one of our French clientele, hence I want to be ready so that I can flaunt my ability to interact in French in front of them.
Thank you for your consideration.
Your’s Faithfully,
Kutub.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and understand the language quickly. As I am very much keen to master it. I wou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57788944724 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74018215959 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592964824121 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.22508546 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9166666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193611249542 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072665971618 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101842723539 0.0603063233224 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137841252267 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1083617587 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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