Science can now offer people a life expectancy of close to one hundred years or even more. Some people view it in a positive light, but others believe it creates some problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the advancement in science and medical facilities, the medical care has forged ahead in Improving the life span of people. Many people believe it to offer many advantaged, whereas, others dissent. In my opinion, I do believe that by increasing the life expectancy, the society and the country will suffer many problems.
Several individuals agree with increasing the life-span of people close to century or more will have negative effects on the society. As it will lead to population explosion which will lead to many problems such as global warming, water crisis, shortage of land, deforestation, environment pollution. Moreover, it will put a burden on the government as they will have to allocate more funds in building infrastructures, hospitals, community centres to serve the needs of the community. To elucidate, a recent study has shown Delhi has the highest population because of the increase in life span thus putting a load on the government, society and natural environment.
However, others have an opinion that the increased life-expectancy will have a positive impact on the society. As it will increase the population of the older generation who are considered to be the most experience people and will share with the youngers their knowledge and expertise and thus will help them to enlighten. To illustrate, many elderly experienced professors, teachers and researcher share their life experiences, and knowledge with their students thus increasing their level of understanding and intelligence.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that science should not go against the law of nature and increase the life expectancy of people as it will impact the country economically, socially and environmentally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, as for, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41481481481 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14758164838 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8024483736 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.909090909 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138184575428 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668671529878 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509856909461 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100486158094 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378186156184 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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