You had a dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner.
In your letter you should say:
• What you enjoyed at the dinner
• Describe how you feel about his/her family
• Invite your friend and his family to your place
Dear Thomas,
I hope you are doing well. I still remember the time when we first met in the premises of university of Toronto and became best friends. I am grateful to you for helping me at that moment as I was new to the country and it was you who came as a well wisher in a stressed period. I am writing this letter to express my joy over last week’s dinner that you beautifully arranged for me and my family and I would like to thank you for having us at your place.
There were so many elements about the dinner that I admired a lot. I must say that my parents heartily enjoyed the get together. Your dining hall gave me a very warm and cosy feeling in this freezing weather, specially, the way the room was lightened up with dim yet glittering lights. The atmosphere you managed to create gave us a very homely feeling. The Canadian food was a true delight and I would love to visit your home again. Also, the desserts were mouth-watering and different from the sort we have in India, which gave us a unique experience. Moreover, I no longer feel like a foreigner now because of your loving gesture and I feel like a part of your family.
Being an immigrant, we really miss our family parties, as in India we have the culture of mixing up more with our near ones. It was nice on your family’s part to mingle so well with us even on our first meet. They were really supportive of the fact that we belonged to a very different culture. Infact, they seemed very happy to have us over for the dinner. They asked me to express gratitude to you, as well as your family for having such a wonderful time. I am greatly over-whelmed with our and respective families friendship and someday we may even go on a vacation together.
I won’t say as matter of returning favours, but I and my family genuinely want you to come and join us for the New Year Eve. We have planned something special and would love you all to have a go at our style of celebrating things. It is going to be a wonderful ride for you guys as you can’t even imagine the kind of evening you are going to have. Apart from that, we will have bonfire for which I have hired a professional and Canadian wines. My aunt from India is coming that day and she is good with cooking. So be prepared for some amazing Indian delicacies and not to forget, long sessions of gossips at my place.
I am eagerly waiting for the day and from my entire family, I would love to spend the special night with us and experience our hospitality.
Best Wishes,
Udita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ity of Toronto and became best friends. I am grateful to you for helping me at th...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... as a well wisher in a stressed period. I am writing this letter to express my jo...
^
Line 9, column 130, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...ents heartily enjoyed the get together. Your dining hall gave me a very warm and cos...
^^^^
Line 9, column 324, Rule ID: GAVE_GIVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: give
...s. The atmosphere you managed to create gave us a very homely feeling. The Canadian ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 514, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...ly over-whelmed with our and respective families friendship and someday we may even go o...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, well, apart from, i feel, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 5.05154639175 396% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 84.0 32.9175257732 255% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 26.3917525773 231% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 937.175257732 222% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 476.0 206.0 231% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3781512605 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 3.78020617076 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46743138506 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 127.690721649 187% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502100840336 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 290.88556701 230% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.13402061856 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 12.6804123711 197% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1220154476 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.36 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.04 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04 4.34317383033 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 7.41237113402 310% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281883961901 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773192010301 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733012215637 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159420914308 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850534935912 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 41.2886597938 230% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.