some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers,others think that it’s depends on the attitude of the students.Discuss both views and give your opinion
when it comes to the education few people subscribe to the belief that the batter development is the pupil depend on the quality teaching by the mantor wheras,other people think that behaviour of student are affected in achieving better score.before communicating on my decision,both the opinions would be discussed.
firstly,that kind of people if are supporting this thing better development is the student depend on the quality teaching by the knowledgeable instructor because if professors are Possess more literacy so he can giving more illiterate to her good students.
secondly that type of people if are thinking students behaviour is more affected in getting good knowledge from her trainer.like according to a parable, How much more knowledge can one obtain from a sir when the student is in the land of the student.
Both of the things are right but one of the my side i agree with that people good instructors are more comfortable for giving better education for students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 161.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15527950311 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01384995308 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2429034903 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 207.5 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.25 20.7667163134 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217989760093 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137902036052 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546820866982 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137902036052 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546820866982 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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