You were offered to join in a company but for some other reasons you can’t join there.Write a letter to the HR of the company.In your letter: » Explain the reason why you are declining the offer » Express you gratitude » Explain you like your current job very much.
Hi sir,
I am an employee of Benz Machine Company in Germany and have been working for this company for 5 years.I am writing your response to the invitation you sent me and unfortunately I cannot say that I cannot join your company.
I have many reasons to reject your suggestion, which I will describe below.First, I have a contract with Benz for another 5 years so I can't leave the company until then.Secondly, the amount of rights and amenities you offer is much less than my current amenities.
I really thank you for this invitation. And I know that I could make a lot of progress in your company's work environment and register new inventions.And I hope to work closely with your company someday.
On the other hand, I am very interested in staying in the current company. The team I work for are really dedicated and have excellent relationships with all members of the group.And we also have a work project that I have outlined the main idea of this project and I am waiting for it to come to fruition.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours sincerely
Daniali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...en working for this company for 5 years.I am writing your response to the invitat...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y that I cannot join your company. I have many reasons to reject your sugges...
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Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...suggestion, which I will describe below.First, I have a contract with Benz for anothe...
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Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ract with Benz for another 5 years so I cant leave the company until then.Secondly, ...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
... so I cant leave the company until then.Secondly, the amount of rights and amenities you...
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Line 13, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...environment and register new inventions.And I hope to work closely with your compan...
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Line 17, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...tionships with all members of the group.And we also have a work project that I have...
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Line 17, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct that I have outlined the main idea of this project and I am waiting for it to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76649746193 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8292924507 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58883248731 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0713982279 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 76.5299724578 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 16.8248392259 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 4.34317383033 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255111170778 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127511623014 0.0766984524023 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634734062875 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143964318023 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538692686048 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 8.37731958763 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.