TPO 51
In this set of materials, both the reading passage and the lecturer discuss some elephants as a fascinating animal for human. The reading passage states three common beliefs about the elephants; However the professor refutes all of them, citing that these beliefs are the results of the misundestanding of elephants' behaviour.
Firstly, the article contends that elephants are consicous of death beacause when they get old, they would leave their herd and go off near the rivers untill they die. On the other hand, the lecturer articulates that the elephants' break away has practical reason. When the elephants get old they lose their teeth; thus, the chewing is hard for them, and as a result they leave their herd to find softer vegetation to eat. These vegetation are commonly grow near the river; thus, the go near the river and stay there until they die.
In addition, the essay alleges that the elephants have the artisitic ability, and even some of them have some drawings of flowers or other elephants. Nevertheless, the lecturer avers that the elephans do not have any artistic abilities, and it is a kind of trick. In other words, elephants are very sensitive to their ears, and they have some instructors who touch their ears and they brush a stroke on the paper. However, they do not know the painting is illustrating a flower or animal.
Eventually, the text asserts that the elephants fear the mices and some scientists' research are proving this hypothesis. On the contrary, the lecturer declares that they are not afraid of mice, and their reaction to the mice is due to the fact that they are unfamiliar with the mice; However, the elephants which are in the zoos and have familiarity with the mice would not fear the elephants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this vegetation' or 'These vegetations'?
Suggestion: This vegetation; These vegetations
... herd to find softer vegetation to eat. These vegetation are commonly grow near the river; thus,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 453, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...n to eat. These vegetation are commonly grow near the river; thus, the go near the r...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, nevertheless, so, thus, even so, in addition, kind of, as a result, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 298.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90604026846 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53359927073 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503355704698 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5731044023 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 21.698381199 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06452816374 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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