Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Certain people argue that doctors play a very important role in the development of the society, whereas, others have an opinion that inventors should be given more weightage. In my opinion, both inventors and doctors are equally important for the success of the nation.
Inventors are creative people who develop new ideas and products. The inventors have contributed to the world with brilliant inventions that have made the lives of people much easier. the life expectancy of people has been improved by the invention don in finding cure to illnesses. Moreover, the invention of electricity, cars, airplanes have made the lives very comfortable as now they can cover large distances in less time; there is light in every house an people do not have to spend their time in darkness. To illustrate, the greatest inventor Jonas Walker was the first one to develop the vaccine of polio as before this invention children were having problems of crippled legs.
Moreover, Doctors are the people who cure illnesses of people. In other words, there is a popular verbalisation that doctors are a most respectable profession as they give second life to people. Everyone depends on doctors for any health issues as they have gained this knowledge with years of study and practice. Moreover, with the advancement in health care and medicine cure to every disease is possible thus increasing the life span of people of the society.
To conclude, I strongly agree that a society needs both doctors and inventors for its development as without the inventions the doctors will not get to know the cure of many diseases and if inventors suffer any health related issues they go to a doctor for medicine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e made the lives of people much easier. the life expectancy of people has been impr...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ess time; there is light in every house an people do not have to spend their time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, thus, whereas, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03191489362 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63492119765 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549645390071 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6664338915 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136111481078 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516533840056 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365616615439 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854732089962 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196573315253 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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