Many people think that it is unnecessary to teach children handwriting skills in this technology age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that teaching handwriting skills for children is no longer necessary in this technology age. This essay is completely disagree with this statement because of the following reasons
First, teaching handwriting skills in early ages could bring about lots of benefit for children in their later life. Practicing handwriting force children to learn how to control little things like a pencil to create words, and when they master it, it will help them a lot in using other things in their daily life like knifes, paint brushes or chopsticks more accurately. Moreover, learning to create handwritten words require a lot of effort and time-consuming but it is a very good way to form their patience, which is a very important characteristic in their later life.
Another reason why I am favor for this opinion is that handwriting skills are always needed no matter how immensely our technology has been developed. Handwritten words are also one of our identity as signature has been use for decade to prove that we accept somethings as a truth. Not only that, many companies have started to require a handwritten CV so they can have a better understanding about the applicants, as handwriting skills tell a lot about one’s personality and characteristic.
Finally, in many countries like Japan or China, handwritten words also represent their tradition and culture so it is vital for children to learn how to write the national typeface by hand. Chinese or japanese are often very proud of their simplified chinese or kanji, as a lot of countries around the word using latin words, these hieroglyph language are very special and learning to write these typeface since very young age will help children to pay more interest in their national history and tradition, which will later develop into patriotism
In conclusion, I strongly believe that handwriting skills are always vital to teach children because not only it will help them to achieve many other basic skills, develop their later characteristic but the handwriting skills also tell a lot about person’s personality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 327, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this hieroglyph' or 'these hieroglyphs'?
Suggestion: this hieroglyph; these hieroglyphs
...ries around the word using latin words, these hieroglyph language are very special and learning ...
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Line 13, column 392, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this typeface' or 'these typefaces'?
Suggestion: this typeface; these typefaces
... are very special and learning to write these typeface since very young age will help children...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19883040936 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86251187147 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514619883041 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.292405106 49.4020404114 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.555555556 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.7667163134 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218433721205 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117132888957 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125180951274 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159656473546 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11668740213 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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