There is no gainsaying that movies and television have curcial role in human beings' lives. In this respect, there are conroversial arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of this means. Some people believe that the benefits of television and movies outweigh their disadvantags. In contrast, some people hold oppostie view. From my perspective, television and movies have possivie effects on the people especially young people. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate my points of view.
First exquisite point to be mentioned is that young people should spend their lisure time anyway. Television is the best means for spending the time and having entertainment. Young people are able to watch some sport events like soccer games on television or watch some exciting soap opera on television with their families. However, some people think that televsion make young people lazy and they get accustome to sedentary lifestyles. This is a reasonable concerning and there is no debate that people should spend appropriate time for watching televison and they should not watch televesion whold the day. Therefore, television and movies are the best means for young people to have entertainment.
Another conspicuous aspect of the television and movies is that they are informative. The great majority of young people just spend time with their friends and they have no idea about the global events. Televison is a proper media for young people to know more about the political, social, environmental events in throughout the world. This goes without saying that most people obtain a big proportion of their knowledge by watching television, so television is a suitable means for informing the people especially young people. Television can get these people informed through some exciting program. For instance, there is a exciting show in my country that the people try to train people especially teenagers for conservating the environment. Some stand up comedians have performance in this show.
Last but not least, there is no doubt that movis and television like other means have some disadvantages. Considering the pros and cons of television and movies illustrate that some young people are influenced by some violent movies' scenes. For example, there was a popular movie in my coutry which was for childish age but there were some frightening and violent scene in this movie and after a while people objected to that and the movies show was ceased.
In conclusion, contemplating all aforementioned paragraphs, television and movies have more constructive impacts on the young people than negative influence. Because, television are a good way for young people to have entertainment. They are able to know about the events all around the word. There is no debate, that some movies like documenteris are instructive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2389.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34451901566 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86247883219 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44966442953 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9508457184 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8846153846 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1923076923 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235648062512 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845115847262 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616420997308 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163260749661 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330039260252 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.