You recently attended a meeting at a hotel, when you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter,
Say where you think you left the papers.
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I have forget some crucial documents during Halliburon’s company meeting last month which held in your hotel. I think I lost those documents on table number 5 in the main meeting hall.
Let me explain the reasons that make these papers really important. These papers are the minutes of the meeting, and without them, I will face many problems in preparing meeting's report. As a consequence, my manager will deduct five days from my monthly salary.
Based on the upper reasons, I hope you start searching in the upper mentioned location, which I am sure you will find them, and if you found them, please send them by mail on the company address. But if you did not, please let me know to come and search by myself.
I hope to hear from you very soon.
Best regards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
... am writing to let you know that I have forget some crucial documents during Halliburo...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 687.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43483058959 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4107510986 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255994659808 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870624419509 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758756619963 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149973467363 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069041392796 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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