first of all according to authors perspective because of the new municipal golf course and resort hotel there more number of people are visit at vista see side. but here is no strong evidence that the supports that this up surge happen because of the new opened hotel and golf course.there may be a possibility that due to the weekend or may be some national holiday so people are visiting that place.
moreover other said that due to that new innovation at seaside, more people influence to start there oven business and so that they apply for a business loan. but there is no realation to the business loan and the new enovation.there are may be some economical factors,and due to that factors number of application of business loan rise.in addition to that the argument cites that,in particular year there is an increase in the collection of tax but that does not mean that that happen because of the new development at seaside. that may posiableties that at that particular year there may be rise in economy so more people get more benefits and due to that reason, people of the seaside pay more tax than the previous year.but that does not implies that this tax rise happen due to the new devlopment.
finally, i do not support the author's views that build a new golf course and resort hotel in Brindleburg helps to get more tax and revenue.if there is already one resort then it does not mean that another similar development more number of people .there may be a possibility that this does not help to get more profit from the new devlopment.and because of that the desire thing that goverment want to do from the money that will not fulfill and there may ne burdonsome because of to not satisfied revenue.
- The following appeared in a memo from the mayor of Brindleburg to the city council."Two years ago, the town of Seaside Vista opened a new municipal golf course and resort hotel. Since then, the Seaside Vista Tourism Board has repor 63
- The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disag 50
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 306 350
No. of Characters: 1397 1500
No. of Different Words: 129 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.182 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.565 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.517 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 61.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 32.64 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.549 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.742 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.218 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
first of all according to authors perspective...
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Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'author'.
Suggestion: author
first of all according to authors perspective because of the new municipa...
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Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... of people are visit at vista see side. but here is no strong evidence that the sup...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...y so people are visiting that place. moreover other said that due to that new innovat...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: moreover,
...y so people are visiting that place. moreover other said that due to that new innovat...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
... moreover other said that due to that new innovation at seaside, more people influence to st...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...so that they apply for a business loan. but there is no realation to the business l...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...the new enovation.there are may be some economical factors,and due to that factors number ...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...there are may be some economical factors,and due to that factors number of applicati...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...addition to that the argument cites that,in particular year there is an increase in...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is an increase in the collection of tax but that does not mean that that happen ...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...llection of tax but that does not mean that that happen because of the new development a...
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Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ause of the new development at seaside. that may posiableties that at that particula...
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Line 3, column 647, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omy so more people get more benefits and due to that reason, people of the seasid...
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Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more tax than the previous year.but that does not implies that this tax rise happ...
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Line 3, column 746, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'imply'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: imply
...an the previous year.but that does not implies that this tax rise happen due to the ne...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...se happen due to the new devlopment. finally, i do not support the authors views tha...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... due to the new devlopment. finally, i do not support the authors views that b...
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Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...imilar development more number of people .there may be a possibility that this do...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people .there may be a possibility that this does not help to get more profit fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, in addition, in particular, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 13.6137724551 184% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 2260.96107784 63% => OK
No of words: 304.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67105263158 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56926215736 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 204.123752495 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440789473684 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 705.55239521 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.8473053892 219% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.738203778 57.8364921388 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.666666667 119.503703932 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 50.6666666667 23.324526521 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.70786347227 263% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142823293481 0.218282227539 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822839961988 0.0743258471296 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559761042063 0.0701772020484 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110217042898 0.128457276422 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376916702539 0.0628817314937 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 14.3799401198 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 48.3550499002 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 12.197005988 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 11.1389221557 198% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.9071856287 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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