You have just spent a weekend staying at the Taj hotel in Mumbai. When you get home you find out that you have left a bag at the hotel.
explain in the letter when did you visit the hotel
the details of your room and the bag
how can one identify the bag?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I visited your hotel on 24th March and stayed until 28th March for business meeting. It was surely a great visit, however, on reaching home I realized that I had left my laptop bag at the hotel.
If I recall correctly, I stayed in room 342 on the second corridor of fourth floor with a sea view. The room was large enough to be considered as suit room. It had a double bed, a table and an armchair. On the departure day, I hurried up to not to miss my flight and I forgot my laptop bag in the room.
My bag is the navy blue laptop bag with the brand name "XY Lap" embossed on the front. It has two zipped compartments. I had kept mt laptop in one of compartments. My adapter and some official documents were also inside.
I would appreciate if you could check the room and tell if there is a laptop bag. My number is 0 533 123 34 34. I would be grateful if you could send it to the my office tomorrow. I would like to state that the cargo service will be paid by me.
Thank you.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully.
Başak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: 34
...is a laptop bag. My number is 0 533 123 34 34. I would be grateful if you could send ...
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Line 9, column 157, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...uld be grateful if you could send it to the my office tomorrow. I would like to state ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23557692308 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38955366459 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9406173065 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7333333333 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232772150448 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749864682546 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08001628269 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117843577652 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510981327962 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.72 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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