You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job.You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
>say why she/he would not enjoy going to college.
>explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
>suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Jason,
I started writing right after receiving your letter as this is my responsibility to assist you as a friend. As you mentioned, you are in a fix whether to pursue the college or enter the job market, considering your aspects, I would recommend you getting a suitable job as soon as possible.
We have been together since our childhood. You have always been a person of free-will, moreover you intended to commence your own business firm. I don’t think the regulations as well as structured education of a college is suitable for you. You would rather become bored and exhausted than gaining required knowledge for starting business.
Entering a job market offers numerous opportunities to a person, not limited to communication and writing skills. It also provides the employees with vast experience on various arena. If you get a job, you will be able to develop a network among the people of every sectors, which will be an asset for your start-up business.
Starting a business is a critical task, so please ensure that you gather the required skills, abilities and capital before stepping into one. I would suggest you to look for sales job as it trains a salesman to achieve target with limited resource, not to mention the other capabilities you will learn in time.
I hope my letter will help you make the decision. Finally, listen to your mind, where you want to be in future, before deciding. Don’t forget to inform me once you have made your mind.
Take care,
Tasnim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 102, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...sten to your mind, where you want to be in future, before deciding. Don't forget to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92217898833 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70341502832 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2466818918 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270047929459 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869436754516 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699690647034 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164077603971 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830151178204 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.